Early double celebration
Wang Wei Wen
In the recent Qinwenqi books in China, the Ping An Scripture, which is too easy to understand with words last week, became popular last week. One of the compositions of the Zhejiang college entrance examination is going to another extreme because of the style of writing.Chinese netizens enthusiastically score to form a polarization evaluation.Most netizens said they were dumbfounded and exclaimed how I couldn't understand it!
This article entitled a full -scale composition living on the tree. The full text last Sunday (August 2) was announced by Zhejiang Teaching Monthly Magazine on its WeChat public account.The first paragraph of the composition is written: modern society is lsquo in Heidegger; all practice tradition has been disintegrated.The expectations of family and social traditions are losing their reference significance.But in the face of the seemingly endless future sky, I want to follow Calvino lsquo; Baron on the tree, rsquo;
The obscure style has not ended there, but through this composition of about 800 words, which mentioned many philosophers, sociologists, writers such as Heidegger, Calvino, and a bunch of ordinary people.The rare characters that can't be read.After the composition was exposed on the Internet, a stone stirred up thousands of waves.
Opponents believe that this article is not good at talking, and the language world is too far away from the language world of ordinary people. It is obscure and difficult to understand. The concepts of stacking are suspected of presence and dazzling skills.Some netizens also described it as the eight texts of the fans as an advanced version. They won the appreciation of the teacher with the high -level sense of the text and did not deserve to get full scores.
However, netizens who defended the composition believed that the composition was attracted by the composition, logically rigorous, and reasonable. It was a masterpiece, showing candidates' deep vocabulary and reading skills.Some experts believe that this rare composition has appeared and encouraged; can get full scores, and also reflects respect and advocacy of personalized expression.
The famous Chinese writer Ma Boyong commented on Weibo on Monday that it is difficult to use a full score or rotten composition to simply evaluate it on a tree.He believes that although the biological words, allusions, and expressions used in the text have been used in the right place, the problem is that there is no need for this; the meaning of the expression in the composition can be completely organized with more flat and simple words, and the information will not be lost at all.The four words are summarized: not allocating.
Ma Boyong also believes that the real problem lies in the teacher.
However, the three scroll teachers also had differences in composition scores.Chen Jianxin, the leader of the composition of the composition of the college entrance examination of Zhejiang, introduced that the first teacher gave only 39 points, and the last two scored 55 points. The composition was finally judged as a full score of 60 points.
Chen Jianxin also highly evaluated this full composition, describing his old and obscure with, and the profound and stable thinking.As for public opinion questioning the obscure and difficult understanding of the composition, Chen Jianxin did not shy away that he did not want students to imitate, but still believed that the scores obtained by the composition were just right.
Nevertheless, the staff of the Zhejiang Education Examination Institute said on Monday that they had intervened in handling the above composition.The teaching monthly magazine has also deleted composition on WeChat as of now.The surging news quoted the teaching monthly employee the day before yesterday that deletion was because the recruitment of the college entrance examination in Zhejiang Province is still ongoing, and it may not be very suitable for release.
Is it true to live on the tree, or is it a dedication?In fact, the evaluation of an article is often different from personal subjective preferences.The evaluation of such an articles is bound to be that the benevolent see the wisdom and wisdom, and it will cause the current polarization comment.
But objectively speaking, this composition does create many readers for readers, and it is quite laborious to read.Facing the cold words such as Kenya Zhenyu Kenjiyu, the charm 婞 婞 矻矻, from time to time, you must check the dictionary.
This composition has indeed played the head in the use of unpopular vocabulary and celebrity quotes.In fact, most of the writing styles of the article are mostly flat and clear, so that people can understand at a glance, and never be high -profile.The Northern Song Dynasty Grand Wenhao Su Shi had criticized the hardships of hardships, and the atmosphere that the text was easy to say is still reasonable.
On the other hand, living on the tree not only gets full points, but also publicly praise, it is expected to have a very strong demonstration effect.The authorities were taken out for examples to propagate, but they were a double -edged sword. While reflecting the possibility of the possibility of the tolerance of the scroll group, it was also unavoidable to release the signal of this style of writing to the candidates.Living on the tree mode.In the past few years, the college entrance examination composition has obtained a full score in classical Chinese. In the next few years, classical Chinese imitation has been caused.
In order to avoid living on the tree that may cause a single -sex demonstration effect, some comments believe that the authorities should consider publishing more high -scoring compositions and full score compositions, so that candidates should know that good composition should not only be this way.
There is a good job, and there is something down. If the authorities cannot quickly clarify their positions, I believe that next year, the college entrance examination composition will gain more lives on the trees with more obscure expression and rare words.
